i fettle the curves in the neck
and remorse plays on the strings of
my chords
the fancy love songs
and cherub blues you mourn, swoon
and swindle under my skin,
torn from a page lost
in fretful scorn,
a love-lorn loser who burns
like the scorched innuendo’s
you play on your horn—
a violin singing
a sliding trombone
beat to the drum
of your bluesy tone.
©Jay Mora-Shihadeh
revised 3/22
Photo by Joel Wyncott on Unsplash
Thanks so much for your comments, Cheers!
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This is magnificent and visual, like a long lost daydream in a coffee house . Beautiful
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Beautiful, Jay. I love the blend of bluesy sounds in this and all the emotion imbued in the play.
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Thank you Diana! 😊 I appreciate you stopping by.
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I love this. I love the way you paint with words.
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Thank you Tara! I love that analogy, words are my palette 🎨
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I can tell!
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Beautiful poetry
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Thanks so much my friend 🙋🏻♂️
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It is indeed a pleasure
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Well written….
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Thank you, Navin
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You’re welcome ✨
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