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We wedge the moon into the night
reluctant to end the daylight
eager as fire lit on match sticks
we dampen the sun, petrol as it is
danger threatening the sky with bombs
of cloud-nines, bolts, thunder drums
the moon glares at us, laser pointed squarely
into third- eyes sleeping, neglect living like vermin on [ read more ]
UNNATURAL SWEETS by Jay Mora-Shihadeh — MasticadoresUsa // Editora: Gabriela Marie Milton
I am delighted to congratulate you! This piece is stunning, fiery, and I feel it in each word I read. ❤
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Thank you so much, Jaya! I’m very happy you enjoyed reading this one. 🙋🏻♂️
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Absolutely amazing piece. I left a comment on masticadoresusa. So well sad. The earth is literally screaming at us. Hugs, Joni
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Great work, dear Jay 💜💜💜
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Thank you very much, Luisa! 😊
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It’s well deserved praise! 🙂
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🙏🏼 😌
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Congratulations Jay. Wow, powerful poem!💖
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🙏🏻 Thanks again my friend, glad you enjoyed it.
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you’re so welcome Jay💖
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Unexpected, surprising wordage. Super excellent!
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Thanks Benjamin! Glad you enjoyed it.
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Welcome! 🙂
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Amazing piece. Love it!❤️
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Thank you!😊
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My pleasure.💕
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Both visually and emotionally vivid. Great work!
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Thanks so much Cassa! 🙋🏽♂️ 🙏🏼
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