Sop and sweet
Tea, on my breath
A side of Peach
Lolli
Pop On a stick
Between
Your teeth
You smile
Deep
Regret lingers
In the leaves
At the bottom
Of my tea
Cup, a solemn
Reprieve
Left inside
A lost
Beginning
A chance of
Meetings
Always with
Tea and me
And Lolli
Hanging
Mercilessly
Between your
Tattered
Broken teeth.
©Jay Mora-Shihadeh revised 9/9/21
Photo by Vova Krasilnikov from Pexels
#Poetry #Spokenword #Lyrical #Lollipops
That is a great piece of writing Jay! The line break and imagery is fabulous!😀
“Lolli
Pop On a stick
Between
Your teeth
You smile
Deep”
That is superb!!! Both the breaks and imagery😜😅
What is implied perfectly pitched behind the scenery!
🙏
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I’m so glad you enjoyed this, Didier. Thanks for the feedback!
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You are most welcome 😊🙏
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Wow that was dope brother
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Thanks 👍🏻
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