Petals dew
drop
mists of you
form
in light
engraved
in stone
bled through
dirt washed
seeped
in relief
peaks
of waves
crested
the hilltop
battering
your view
rain of death
life
remained
embittered journey
comes
to an end.
©Jay Mora-Shihadeh
A beautiful unfolding heartbreak. I loved the flow and the presentation.👌
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Thank you very much
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You are most welcome 😃🙏
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Your small word lines draw this piece to a thought-provoking ending! Bitterness makes the sharpness you capture in your writing.
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Thank you very much, Jaya.
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Wonderful 👏👏👏
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❤️ Grazi
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