Did you know I could stay here all day?
writing and wasting away
words keep coming
releasing a gorge
an orgy of thumping dancing syllables surge
playing on my tongue, jumping in my head
begging to display.
I love this feeling, intensity and healing
pleasing my body with lusciousness reeling,
bleeding from my mouth to my page.
Did you know I could stay here all day?
penning and pining, bated breath reclining
waiting, for something to say.
it’s nighttime now, but time is out of place
when images are flying, bouncing from space
to grace this page alive,
with such disgrace
emboldened, completely burning away.
Did you know I could stay here all day?
©️Jay Mora-Shihadeh
Photo by Lisa Fotios from Pexels
Original Post first blogged on Feb. 9th 2020
This poem came up, when my wife and I were talking about how fast time goes by, when you are in that flow of creativity as an artist. And, I wrote this as an expression of that experience, and damnit, it’s hard to pull ones self away from that flow, to attend to the ever nagging “tasks”, that prey on me, on a daily basis. This will forever be my love and my potential demise, I suppose. arggghh!
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i love the energy in this and the joy. The interspersed rhyme is perfect (say a person who generally dislikes rhyme). Wonderful poem.
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haha thank you, and i totally understand that dislike, but i sometimes, well maybe often, can’t help myself, if said just sooo…
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You pulled it off 🙂 and absolutely fitting for the poem.
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Very skillfully observed
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thank you d.a.
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It’s a pleasure
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That is absolutely beautiful, Jay, so harmoniously penned, really, sounds, words coming together just perfectly.
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Thanks so much George, it literally came spilling out one day…I’ve had that experience many times over with my painting as well, one time, I literally felt electricity pulse out of my finger tips during a painting session many years back…Best!
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Oh brilliant! The amazingly feeling physical experience of the artist. Well done, you!
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oh man, absolutely. You get in the creative flow and there’s no swimming out of the stream to reality. The creation IS reality. I hear nothing else. “Time” means nothing.
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Yes, time is an illusion, and sometimes reality becomes the Reality, oh man i’m so confused right now… :))
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Absolutely! You totally get it.
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You are so right about the flow…I sometimes call it a trance because it’s this zone unlike anything else and it’s quite magical! Beautiful piece Jay, I always love your work and you inspire me as a poet and person!!! Keep shining friend, much love 🖤🖤
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The zone, the flow, the trance it’s all the magic and it is my favorite space to be in. And thank you for your kind words Ace, I appreciate you and your flow! 🙋🏻♂️🔥
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Yes indeed! Awe you’re so welcome and thank you! 🖤
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I can relate. I find myself enthralled with being creative instead of taking care of business. This resonated with me today. Thanks!
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You’re welcome. It is a very common thread…
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