I saw you stand up
You are a mountain
You are an eagle
You are this pen
I saw in your eyes
the world, they spoke to me
of “forever”
the time that passes
through one’s pupils
and into another
I saw the vastness of
the black universe spill
into someone’s coffee cup
and they drank, and You
You stood there, a rock
unmoved. It was as powerful
as this moment
UnShook.
©️Jay Mora-Shihadeh
#Poetry #Universe #Freeverse #Macrophoto
great stuff with some great lines. You also left room for the readers’ imagination! You are a mountain, You are an eagle. You are this pen! A movement being apprehended by something. yeah great stuff
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Awesome! Thanks so much for your feedback my friend, greatly appreciated 😃
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no problem, you are welcome my poetic friend!
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I will be repetitive, but I always find something hypnotic in your writing.
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Thank you giusy10! Hypnotic is good, great compliment 😊
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